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Review:asdfghjkl says:
Oh my gosh, I can hardly believe I just started reading this. I'm a little upset with not having started it earlier! I really love it so far, please keep writing! I absolutely love how awkward she gets when she stumbles upon Albus with some girl. And to be honest, I really like that it happened, that it wasn't just Albus following her around in a blind love-struck-teenage-boy way that a lot of stories do. Not that there's anything wrong with that, of course, but it's good to see something a little more original :) and I could not stop grinning when she was standing up to James on the pitch. I did not see anything like that coming before this chapter but it was amazing! Haha, update soon! I can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Hello :)
Thank you for your lovely review! I'm glad you stumbled upon my story :)

I also thought that Albus following her around would be really boring and also kind of unrealistic... First of all, he is still a handsome Potter and secondly, I don't know if I was just unlucky but I've never met a teenage boy who was that lovestruck...

I'm glad you liked the scene in which Seth stands up to James. It seems a little out of character in this chapter but it will soon become more understandable :)

Thank you again for taking the time to review! I really appreciate it!


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