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Review:happyanon says:
It's going on a slower pace than I anticipated but no matter. Hmm may i be honest? Yes. This chapter didn't have THAT much in it. For me,I'd really appreciate waiting for an update that has more story in to it. If it wasnt for Seth standing up for herself it would be a boring chapter.. I just think it needs more going on per chapter. But not so much that it's overwhelming. Don't get me wrong,I adore this story but right now i think it needs to have a little bit of solidity? Do I make sense? I don't know.. but I like it. So you know pls keep updating I do adore Seth.

Author's Response: Hello! First of all, thank you for taking the time to review this chapter and also for your honesty! You are right, the story is moving slowly - I like to think that the slow pace provides enough room for my characters (especially Seth and Katie) to develop and be well-rounded. I want to show them in as many situations as possible that are not all (as is the case with many fanfictions) James-related situations. Sometimes I get frustrated with fics that move too fast so I guess this is just a personal preference :)

But enough with all the justifications :) I really think you have a point there - this chapter included a lot of information that is not crucial to the plot, I guess. I cannot promise that the pace of the story will speed up but there will definitely be more James/Seth interaction.

Thank you again for your critical input! I appreciate your honesty and I hope you will continue reading! :)

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