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Review:Loonylovegood67890 says:
Noo!! They were going to be happy and have a family and then... Why?! The feels from this chapter.

When Hermione told Draco about the child completely shocked me. I was expecting something else but definitely not that. That's a good thing though. My, my, you just keep throwing in those bombshells as casually as ever don't you? :)

I'm annoyed at Draco for leaving Hermione because of a job, but I think it must have been very important for him to actually leave. Although I'm not sure anything can justify it. I know this is a Dramione fic so I'm rooting for them to get back together eventually - this Kristian character is too shady to me - though I don't know how she will forgive him.

Wonderfully written! Please keep it up and finish this.

Author's Response: From your response I seem to have achieved my goal! I really wanted readers to see that they have hit rock bottom of their relationship and it may be impossible to get it back on track.
I felt like Hermione had to tell him because she's kept all of her emotions and thoughts about it inside for such a long time, with only Ginny knowing about what happened. Even then she wouldn't talk about it to her. I think it was only right that she wouldn't be able to hide what happened and her feelings from Draco, the one person that knows her better than anyone.
In one of your reviews you asked me a couple of questions and although I couldn't answer them I was hoping that you could answer some of mine. I'm struggling to see if I've represented Draco how I really want to. I'd love to know your perceptions of him! Like we can tell Hermione was utterly and totally devoted to him and so in love but do you think Draco feels the same from what you have read? I also wanted to keep his original personality too though so I'd really like to know if I'm going about that the right way?
In return I shall give you a little teaser/mini spoiler. You should be annoyed at Draco for leaving her but in future chapters you will find that it is justifiable and maybe one of the nicest things he's ever done... That's all I can say without giving it all away! :)
Kristian is a fun character for me to write because he's completely original but I can't give anything about him away just yet :)
I will definitely be updating soon and I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Any help on Draco's character would be appreciated so much! I'd be forever thankful!
Thank you for leaving another amazing review!

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