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Review:kenpo says:
Hello! Story Search #2!

I really enjoyed this story!! Alicia isn't a character I've never given extensive thought to, but I really love the idea that she went on to be an obliviator. I think I might adopt that entirely into my headcanon.

I really loved the lessons. You did a nice job imagining all the different qualifications she'd need to be able to do that job.

I love exploring different magical careers, so this story was a nice treat for me! One thing I would've liked to see is a little stronger characterisation in Alicia. I got bits of it that were really fantastic, like her opinion about the apparation hall and about the instructor, but more would've been nice.

Nice job!

-Georgia

Author's Response: Hi Georgia!

Thank you! Aw, thank you so much, a comment like that really means a lot to me! I think it's always great to reimagine characters we sort of know and put them in a different situation (or different career in this case), than what we might typically expect.

I also really appreciate your kind crit, I'll definitely look into that next time I review my story and try and include some more - characterisation does tend to be one of my weaker areas, I think. Thank you heaps for reading, and writing such a fabulous review!

- Charlotte :)


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