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Review:FredAndGeorgeAreAwesome says:
This chapter felt a little bit scripted. This is the first complaint I've really had about this story. The dialogue didnt flow very well, and it just didnt sound real. I love the progression in the story though, and I agree that Ron would probably want a smaller wedding. Since JK Rowling released the new info on the characters, will you incorporate that into this story? Also, I think you made an error when Ron and Hermione get to the Leaky Cauldron. You mention Blue flames, and I think you meant Green, for Floo Powder. Just thought I'd let you know so you can correct it :)
I still love 19 Years, and I hope you aren't offended by my criticism. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: I'm not the least bit offended! I'm very grateful that you told me and I will definitely look over the dialogue the next time I edit this chapter. Thank tou for helping me improve!!

I'm glad you thought this smaller wedding would fit. If you're referring to the Quidditch Qorkd Cup thing, then yes, I plan to include that. However, it states that Ron leaves the Auror Department after only two years which doesn't work with my story. So that's the only thing I won't include in this story.

And yes, I did mean green flames!

Thank you again for your help and support, it means a lot!!

xxx


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