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Review:Arcoiris says:
Very good chapter. I liked the interaction with Lexie, definitely awkward but I think they came out slightly better for it. I agree about Ron. Now it seems like Rose is learning good lessons of forgiveness towards your husband from her mom. Where was Scorpius in this chapter?

One correction, it should be "couldn't care less." Saying you could care less, is the opposite of what you mean, I think.

Author's Response: It's funny that you pointed out the couldn't care less, because Could care less actually is right. To say that you could care less means that you could actually care less than you do and Rose really does care less. To say you couldn't care less mean that you do care, because you are saying I could not care less than I do. I'm taking this weird grammar class right now and that was like the very first topic that my professor discussed, about how we talk in contradictions all the time.
Now, yes the Lexie Rose moment was really something that was needed. Yes Rose is learning a lesson in forgiveness but that still doesn't change that Scorpius doesn't trust her. She can forgive him for the letters but him not trusting her is completely another issue. Scorpius just didn't fit in. He is in the next chapter (which is up for validation). Thank you for reading and reviewing.


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