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Review:Veritaserum27 says:
Hello!

Here for the BvB review battle. I was intending on reviewing more of this story for WTM appreciation day but... er... real life happened. So! I was excited to see that you were participating in the battle and here I am!

Love. This. Story. I love your characterization of Rose and of Scorpius. (I may have said this in an earlier review, so I'm sorry if I'm repeating). Rose here is the very opposite of how she is normally portrayed. I like that she isn't the "brightest witch of her age" - not very good at maths. I also like that she is tough and making her own way in the world - at the same time, you've made her realistic and not over-the-top with her tough girl act.

Scorpius is just plain adorable. You've managed to give him some unique characterization as well. I love artist-Scorpius. Although the two of them are such opposites, they are really in love with each other. Again, you've done this without making their relationship too dramatic.

I really liked Rose's reaction to holding the baby.

partly because I was afraid I'd drop them and partly because it always made me wish a little bit that I had one as well

I like that she has some inkling of wanting to be a mother (especially concerning how this chapter turned out).

Nice job with the pacing of this! Usually the pregnancy is revealed in the first chapter or it is far too drawn out. She goes home and tells Scorpius, and they have one of their typical conversations - almost like their discussing dinner plans, but they both realize the magnitude of this life change.

Great chapter!

Beth

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