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Review:pfapsm says:
Hello!!

Thank you for the chapter, it was amazing and I had to forcefully keep my mouth shut to prevent myself from smiling too hard (because Scorpius and Albus, and Scorpius and Rose). I am DESPERATELY waiting for Rose to tell him she loves him.

(Is it wrong to be crushing on a fictional character?)

I really like how you wove Astoria into the plot!! I do have a sneaking suspicion that something terrible is about to happen, but... well, that's fanfiction. (My internal chant: pleasedontdiepleasedontdiepleasedontdie.) You're an amazing writer, and your story really gives me new perspectives on what happened after the war, and on the personalities of the characters and their house traits.

Canon Albus has always been a Slytherin to me - I also just read something on literary alchemy which makes it almost certain that he would be one, and also his initials are ASP, like the serpent, an Asp. Maybe some subtle foreshadowing?

In any case, I am loving the story. Feel better soon!!

Author's Response: I crush on fictional characters all the time. I'm not sure it's right to crush on MY fictional characters, but if you find them to your taste, who am I to stop you!

Astoria always had her place in the story, and while it's small for now, we'll see more of her in the future. I don't consider the Stygian Trilogy outright a 'could happen' - I would like to think the Trio got a Happily Ever After, not another war in 25 years - but I'm glad this entertains, and I'm of course rather fond of these characters.

There are some indicators either way on Albus being a Slytherin or not. I think we don't have enough evidence to say either way, alas. But he works as a Slytherin in this one!

Thanks for reviewing.


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