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Review:Veritaserum27 says:
Hello!

So this is my first go at the "Midnight" series. I hope you don't mind I started in the middle, but I clicked on the first chapter and couldn't stop reading! Teddy and Victoire are hysterical! Victoire especially. I laughed out loud at her "inappropriate moans" while the other cousins stared on in shock - the mark of a woman who has experienced enough discomfort to not care terribly much about her lack of decorum.

Ugh! Johnny seems like a nightmare. Why are those kids always at weddings? Great scene with the punch bowl!

The way you've placed the conversations that reveals little tidbits about each character's personality is brilliant. A lot of times, in the first chapter of a story that is part of a series, the author ends up explaining a lot of back story. I know a little bit is necessary, but you've avoided making it tedious and dragged-out. Great first chapter!

Beth

Reviewed for WTMAD (WTM Appreciation Day)

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