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Review:Roisin says:
So this is pretty much the best thing I've read IN THE EVER. I really hope you continue adding chapters--it is so brilliant!

I don't actually know where to begin on this review, aside from general squeeing. How about the story summary? BEST STORY SUMMARY. You won at story summaries.

The language was really amazing--so frenetic and funny and psychadelic. Your knack for description that I loved so much in "Growth" is still here, but more pared down. It suits the comedy of the story really well. And the way you formatted (italics/bold) was a really nice touch. It's amazing to read something whimsical and unorthodox, but also REALLY well written. The story clearly doesn't take itself seriously, but much of the prose still shines!

I could honestly go through sentence by sentence and say something I loved about it.

SO, since there is no value to this review aside from "!!!1!!111!", I will just say: please do finish this story!

Oh yeah: like one or two spelling or grammar thingies, but whatever.


Author's Response: :O

alskdjlak THANK YOU for this amazing and totes unexpected review!! ♥ This is such a lovely surprise! (I also just read your response to my review, and I had no idea that you'd read 'Growth'!! Aww, thank you!! I'm so pleased you liked it!)

And oh dear, oh dear, this story!!! Hahaha, it started off as a bit of a joke. I put up the first chapter with minimal editing, and I have no idea how this thing will turn out, actually! It's a plan-as-you-go kind of fic. For stress relief and whatnot. That being said, I'm pleased to announce that the second chapter's been in the queue for some days now!

And I'm pretty stoked that you like the summary! It took me ages trying to get a summary that sounded nonsensical enough, but which would also not exceed the annoying character limit.

There's certainly much less description here than in 'Growth'. 'Growth' was incredibly difficult to write and balance out all that description, but this piece is all just 'anything-goes'. Your comments on my use of language was just a;lskd;lkasx squeeworthy THANK YOU.

No, not seriously at all! This story just /knows/ that it's a story.

I have no idea what or how the ending even looks like! But I'll do my best to get there somehow, by whatever strange and very out-of-this-world route I must take. :P


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