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Review:MargaretLane says:
The character of Rowena Ravenclaw is one who rather appeals to me. Looking forward to seeing how you characterise her and her life.

Once again, I LOVE the way you use nature related imagery. "The skeletal trees" create an ominous image straight off.

I also like the way you build on what we know about Rowena - that she had a daughter - and what we don't - who the father was.

And now I'm intrigued as to what war he was fighting in. The Saxons against the Normans perhaps. 1066 seems close enough to Founders era.

I wonder if her idea is that they should start Hogwarts.

And now, reading of the dream, I suspect it was.

And I like the way her husband appears to her in a dream, to encourage her to move on. Of course, if he loved her, he would want her to do so.

I agree that Rowena, who appears fairly upper class, would speak quite properly, considering the era she existed in. Although we might be before the feudal era, so it might not be quite as formal a society as what came a little later, but I still think that even writing in translation from Scots Gaelic or whatever the equivalent of this time was or Anglo-Saxon, it sounds better to have them speak a little more properly than people would today.

Really good story and you could definitely write more about the couple.

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