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Review:MargaretLane says:
I thought I'd read chapters from more than one story, so I'm checking this one out now.

*laughs at Luna telling him the holiday would be the perfect place to unwind and then THIS happening* Poor Neville.

And I like the connection you imply between Luna's research and Neville's work as a Herbology Professor. I never thought of it before, but it makes sense their specialisations would bring them into contact with one another.

Aw poor Neville. Even when he does something amazing, like defeating Nagini, he still seems to think he's not good enough. Those thoughts are perfectly in character for him.

And I LOVE the line "accio courage".

And yeah, I REALLY don't think he's going to want Luna's help choosing a vacation spot after this. At least they got through it though.

Author's Response: Hi! Looks like you're taking a tour through my Author's Page. :)

Yes, poor Neville! The guy doesn't deserve so much excitement in his life, especially when all he wants is a place to unwind.

I always pictured Neville and Luna making a good team. If not romantically, they would certainly work well together professionally. I can't imagine Neville Longbottom getting a big head over things, or a permanently inflated ego. He'd probably love the attention for a little while, but I imagine he'd eventually want to get out of the spotlight. He's been brought up with this overwhelming sense of not being good enough. It is sure to at least partially carry over into adulthood for a time.

I loved that line too. It's probably the best two words I've ever put together. ;)

Thanks for the lovely review on this piece!

Pix


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