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Review:awesomepotter says:
Hey there! Here for our review swap :)

This, admittedly, isn't the sort of thing I'd often choose to read on first inspection, but I confess that I really like this piece - the images it conjusres in my head are so vivid, and so sad at the same time. You do a great job of making us feel empathy towards Kasha, but then again I can't bring myself to feel any anger towards Teddy for causing it, although it's pretty fair to say he did. It's also a pretty unusual style you've chosen to write in, and whilst for some people it often hinders writing, in this case you really pull it off, and it even helps us to feel what Kasha's going through as if focuses not on people, or places, or description, but what's going on in her head, the raw emotion she feels. It's very effective and really helps towards creatin what is, in my view at least, an excellent piece of writing. Nothing in particular stood out to me as being OTT, out of place etc., so well done!
A very enjoyable story to read, and I thank you for the review swap!

awesomepotter xxx

(P.S. I'm sorry for such a short review, but there are only so many ways I can think of to tell you your story's awesome without getting weird :P)

Author's Response: Hey!

Thank you so much. And bearing in mind the actual chapters are only 500 words each, I'm not really going to complain about short reviews ;) this is barely even short, it's lovely and long! Thanks :D


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