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Review:MargaretLane says:
*laughs* This is very similar to one of my chapters. I guess it's not surprising that in over three hundred chapters there'd be a few overlapping ones, but nonetheless, I had to read to see how you portrayed what was essentially the same scene - Aberforth telling Albus's portrait he forgave him.

I like the way you portray the conflicts in Aberforth's mind. The way he says he hates his brother, but also loves him and the way he's not sure whether or not it's good to see his brother.

I love the emphasis you've put on his relationship with Ariana and how it seems so much to be the defining relationship in his life.

I also like his realisation of how his brother has spend so much time trying to protect others and the effect Harry's words had on changing his opinions.

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