Hi, Emilie! Here for your requested review!
Sorry for the slight wait--life decided to take a spin on me. However, I'm here now!
There were a few grammar errors, but very seldom, and honestly, anyone would have missed them in their own work. A period there, a quotation mark here. It happens :D
I love your character so far. She seems fascinating, really. I love the way she analyzes everything as a scientist would, because of the way her parents are. It's wonderful, really, and truly adds to her character. She seems very unique, which is always super important, and i cannot wait to read on and see how she is in Hogwarts. I would loveee to see how she is her first time, but if you skip ahead I wouldn't mind that either :D It would still be extremely enjoyable. I wonder what the plot will be... it doesn't seem to have made itself obvious yet, or at least not that I've noticed. Of course, I'm not the best at inferring as it is :D
Thanks for coming by, feel free to again! Though, when I find more time, I will definitely be coming back and reading what else you have posted thus far.
Author's Response: Hey, Leigh!
Thank you for your review and your kind words. I really appreciate it! :D
This chapter is not so much as an introduction to the plot as it is to a discrete hint at how the plot could progress. This one's more about the character, her background story, and how she reacts to people in general.
In the second chapter, we get to see her first train ride and a couple scenes that first day. More character behavioural patterns to help us understand how Annett operates. I hint at her overarching dilemma.
As a precaution to reading this, I have too much fun hinting at things, as opposed to typing them out. Some things are obvious and some aren't. It all has to do with how and when I want things to be revealed and this being the inside of Annett's brain. She's not an omniscient character, so this hinting thing is a rather big part of the story.
But this is why I encourage questions. If there is something Annett is not telling you, you can ask me about it and I'll tell you ;)
Unless it's a major spoiler. . .
Regardless, just trust that everything will be understood at some point in the story. Hopefully, it'll all come together smoothly. Hopefully. . .