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Review:whykay says:
What the hell! OMG - please please put the next chapter in queue. Like right NOW.

HOW did he find out? And WHEN? Did Albus and Rose know? How??? Is that what they talked about in the previous chapter- Iknow-youknow-heknows bit?? What is she doing here? Why didn't she call EVER? Is she the puppeteer? Is she a mask / trap / mole? Is she merely an innocent bystander? I hope Scorpius won't be disappointed though.

This dampened even the OMGTHEYFINALLYDIDIT. Really. Downplayed well. And oh, Rose played dirty - very dirty. She IS discovering the unpleasant sides to herself and that couldn't have been smooth at all. Poor girl.

Poor Albus. He has certainly been very level headed with Scorpius and Rose bickering, hooking up, bickering and all. Plus he has to deal with the mysterious Lisa and the breach of trust (past and impending - though he doesn't know it). And the aftermath of James' cruel words ..

Poor poor Matt. He is so stuck between a rock and a hard place. I feel for him. He doesn't deserve to be lashed out at by Selena ('cuz she can't figure out where they stand - frankly it sounds like she used him), indirectly by Rose ('cuz she told them where they stand and why), obliviously by Scorpius ('cuz Scorose is rocking and is rubbed in his face) and well, ignored by Albus and Lisa (who are caught up with their own guilt, rights and wrongs of their worlds). To top that, he is nerdy. I feel for the boy.

Okay. So, in short, in this chapter and the immediate events leading upto it, I don't feel sorry for Selena. :P :P. Currently. I am sure I will be rooting for her soon. :D

But seriously, you GOTTO put the next chapter in queue NOW. This is what being on tenterhooks mean. . Not nice. AT ALL..

AARRGHH.

Author's Response: Apologies for the tardiness. It's out now!

Scorpius has never explicitly said he doesn't know where she is, just that he never hears from her. Albus and Rose have known enough to SUSPECT, as there were only so many people Scorpius could be taking them to. The other questions... I guess we'll see down the line!

In some ways, those unpleasant parts of Rose have always been there - remember what she was like at the beginning of Ignite. Her own feelings came first, whatever she had to do to fob people off. This is more her regressing, and also combining her newly-honed empathy with her selfishness. So it's a little bit old Rose, rather than just new Rose, and she doesn't like it.

I realised only this chapter that Al and Scorp haven't *really* talked about Scorose, or how Al feels about it, or what he thinks about it. It was about time.

Matt is getting rotten treatment across the board, mostly from people who don't mean to be cruel, and then there's Selena - who doesn't WANT to hurt him, but she's being selfish. And he is a pretty adorable nerd, which doesn't help his case.

Selena's being cruel. Rooting for her right now would be tough. Though it'll be a while before we see more from her.

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