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Review:larissa_allstar says:
Okay so the rest of my comment (see chapter 17 first) didn't post >.< gr

Continuing on haha.

I loved the OC in this one. She clearly had a huge adoration for Quidditch and had a humorous attiude, making her narration a treat to read. Though she was fantastic, it was nice to see that she was stubborn and had trust issues. These flaws really did make her seem more realistic and easier to connect. Afterall, we're definitely not perfect as humans.

Reading from Oliver's POV was also enjoyable! I really think you stayed true to his original character, all while building on and fleshing out the Oliver we know from J.K. I really did enjoy how you didn't make him just this arrogant womanizer, and instead made him realistic with his feelings. I also loved Oliver's friendship with Jeremy.

Speaking of Jeremy, you wrote some killer side characters. They were all actually developed (unlike other fics where they're just static and there for the sole purpose of plot progression) and seeing their friendship with Rona was great c: I really do love seeing friendship in a fic, not just romance haha.

Though the romance in this one was too adorable not to love. Rona's and Oliver's shared love of Quidditch brought them together and it was fantastic. They did have their ups and downs though, however navigating their relationship was fun and I couldn't help but swoon during those kissing scenes lol [;

Overall I adored this one and need more! Off to the sequel I shall go haha.

Author's Response: Thank you! This is a super super old fic to me, but I'm glad that there are still readers that enjoy it. It was a launching point for my future writing, and carries a lot of themes I'd explore more later.

I had an issue with rom-coms where the blame was solely on one person, so I wanted to write one where both had clear faults, and some real relationship advice was doled out (communication! it works!). And I love side characters, even if the ones in this fic are largely cheering on the MCs for the duration of the story, I hoped to explore them more in the sequel (which has been on extended hiatus--sorry!).

Thank you so much for reading! ^__^


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