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Review:nott theodore says:
Hi Zayne!

This was a really enjoyable story and I found it really interesting to read! I don't think that I have ever read a story featuring Snape and Lily from the perspective of Lily before so I loved that - it was very original, I thought. And I loved the way that you selected the words in this piece so that every word really did count in this story. You characterised Lily very well in this piece and I thought that you captured Lily's feelings of betrayal and hurt very well in this as well - the emotions were explored really well and I enjoyed reading what she felt at this point. I think that my favourite part of this one-shot was the line that began 'Hatred.' and continued on listing all of the different nouns that follow it, all of the different concepts that are wrapped up together in Lily's mind when it comes to Snape. I also think the bit when she tried to remind herself that she should call him Snape instead of Severus was really effective! Well done with this!

Sian :)
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Author's Response: Hi Sian!

Thanks for stopping by and reading this piece! I appreciate your kind words about it. I really enjoyed writing it from Lily's perspective. There is that whole idea that everything she's known about magic is slowly being torn down around her. Perhaps she thought she could actually save Snape. In a way she did in the end, but at the moment all she sees is someone who's always been there for her has called her something that puts her way below him. Reminds her that she's the target in the war. Can't have been easy, emotionally, to deal with that.

Than you so much for your review!

Cheers

Zayne


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