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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

This was a really great story, I thought you portrayed the Marauders really well and realistically presented Remus' perspective of things as a werewolf. From the beginning I thought it was very realistic, in the way you described Remus' transition into the werewolf, and how Remus initially is entirely werewolf - and violent - before gradually realising who the other animals are. I liked how they were quite playful with each other at the end, but your story also made me realise just how much of a risk the other Marauders were taking at being animagi and running alongside Remus - it really would have been so easy for an accident to occur. The last line makes me a bit sad at how Remus continues to think he's a monster.. but it's such a believable thing for Remus to think. Nicely written :)

- Charlotte/maskedmuggle
House Cup 2014 Review

Author's Response: Hello again!

Thank you so much for this lovely review! It really means a lot to me! ♥

I'm so glad you think I wrote Remus and the Marauders really well! They're definitely a few of my favourite characters and I'm so glad you thought I wrote them realistically! :D

- Kayla :)


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