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Review:marauderfan says:
:O Isobel and Lucas!! Am I the only person who actually didn't see that coming? I'm glad there wasn't too much drama about it, Emily didn't seem to bothered.

Okay, St Mungos. I love Neville's little cameo as he goes to visit his parents, aww. And LUNA!! Little ten year old Luna, she was adorable and I think you wrote her very well - which is a huge compliment because I think Luna is so often written slightly out of character in fanfiction, but I could hear Luna's voice as I read her lines here, it was perfect. Nice work.

Ah, Laurel... well, I guess she's kind of just how I expected her to be. I'm worried that she'll be depressed after she leaves, since nothing interests her anymore and she's kind of become a robot. At least she has little things like friendship bracelets to occupy her time. And thank goodness for Luna, because she's a breath of fresh air and hopefully she'll rub off on Laurel a bit before Laurel is released from the ward.

No pictures of Tristan as a baby! Hah! This supports my he-was-adopted-at-the-age-of-six theory. As much as the suspense of waiting is frustrating me, I love how you continue to drop little hints, really well paced out. Actually the whole story is incredible in that regard because the amount of planning and thought that went into this really shows, both in the development of the plot and in the well-rounded, flawed characters. :)

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Author's Response: Oh yes, Emily is pretty relaxed about that kind of thing :)

So happy you noticed the Neville cameo! And that you liked Luna--I, like probably everyone else, love Luna, and really wanted to get her right. Since I was adding some pretty significant backstory to her character, and a dark backstory to boot, getting her right was really important to me. Since it's implied by Prof Sprout that rec magic isn't TOTALLY unheard of in the magical world, I thought that Xeno Lovegood was a pretty good candidate.

And yeah, I think Laurel having Luna around is definitely a good thing! Laurel does have pretty far to go, though.

I'm really glad the pacing is working! After I wrote the first draft, that was the thing I spent the most time on (besides basic editing). I'm really happy to hear that you like how that's going!


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