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Review:maskedmuggle says:

Aww, this story had me feeling so many different emotions. It was definitely a brilliant well thought out plot that was also so unique and different. At the beginning everything was so happy, with Roxanne helping her dad out with fireworks. I really liked reading about all the aspects of her life, such as her and Dominique wreaking havoc like Fred/George did despite Roxanne being a Claw. Oh, I also loved your use of the second person here! I personally find it the most difficult to write as compared to first or third person, but you made it look so easy! It definitely worked so well for your story!

The accident was so sad. I was so moved by George's decision to get rid of the fireworks in his shop because it so very strongly depicted the significance of Roxanne's injuries on changing his mind about the fun vs safety of fireworks. I was even more moved by the ending where Roxanne is able to overcome everything and wear a skirt. That was a lovely moment. I also haven't as of yet stated how much I love that you've chosen to focus your story collection on Roxanne - you've depicted her as such a fascinating character to read about and I really love all the different facets to her personality. I really thought this was a terrific story and it was really well written as well! :)

- Charlotte/maskedmuggle
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