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Review:nott theodore says:
Hi Jami!

I really liked the Order meeting at the beginning of this chapter - it's so nice that we can get a bigger picture of all that's going on with the war and we're seeing it from both sides in this story. It's impressive the way that you're able to handle so many plotlines and bring everything together like that. The only suggestion I'd make is during the meeting, there's one point when you refer to Marlene as 'Miss McKinnon' in the narrative, which felt a bit out of place when everyone else is called by first names. But I liked the reminder that they're just children and the moral dilemma that comes with it - do they involve someone that young in the war?

I really enjoyed reading the build up to the match and the match itself as well. It's great that Lily and Belle will have a flat in the same building as the boys! And I loved reading the match - of course, the fact that Gryffindor just one the Quidditch Cup made it even better! The ending was great though, because I thought that it was a good reminder of the way that Lily's been affected by all the recent events, I'm just glad that James was there for her! ♥

Sian :)
Gryffindor House Cup 2014 Review

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