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Review:teh tarik says:
So I've already read this, when I was doing the quick beta job for you, and I absolutely loved it! It's great to see that you've kept using second person POV, even for a different character. I think second person POV works marvellously well with short pieces, and I think you did a great job with George's character. I love seeing more of Roxanne. She's definitely grown up a lot more. Her accident was so awful, and I guess it's one of the worst things that can happen to people. But Roxanne is strong; she just doesn't let the accident define her for life; she picks herself up and recovers and regains her life, slowly. I can just imagine George swelling with pride when he looks at his tough, spunky daughter.

I'm a little sad that George and Angie have divorced; George/Angie is one of my favourite Weasley canon ships, but oh well, at least they're on relatively cordial terms with each other!

This was a wonderful piece, Isobel! On to the next chapter!

-teh
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