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Review:Veritaserum27 says:
Hello Kiana,

Holy cow. I din't think you could top the last chapter in terms of action, but... WOW. I can't even right now. There was so much going on. At leas the other know about George and Edward now. Although I find it suspicious that Scorpius wondered where Edward was but Charlotte and David did not. Either they didn't notice and just want to leave the fighting or they are in on it. I'm still on this Fred and George thing. It is too coincidental. And ah! The potion is gone. How are they going to get back now? Please tell me Scorpius doesn't die. He can't die. He and Rose just realized that they love each other. Even if they have to live one hundred years in the past, they can't die. I can't even make any predictions right now. I'm too upset. AND you've written this so well that I have no idea what is going to happen next. I have to go to work now, but I will be back later on to read/review the rest. Aarrrgh!

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Author's Response: Hi Beth!

Bahaha, holy cow is probably the best words for it. Everything does get more out in the open in this chapter which should make it a little clearer for you too. Erm, as for the Fred and George thing, I wouldn't put too much thought into this shall I say as that might just be a little slip-up from the author showing up here :P Erm, yes for Rose and Scorpius they definitely have a lot more twists in their tale to come and though I can't say what will happen obviously, I hope you like it and that's it's not too upsetting.

Thanks for a great review! :D


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