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Review:Beeezie says:
Oh, this was so, so gut-wrenching. I think that in DH, I spend most of my energy feeling bad for Hermione for losing her family, albeit by her own actions and for a (hopefully) limited period of time, that I never really think about what it must have been like for her parents.

This was a wonderful look at what they might have experienced, though. I loved the fleeting sense "Monica" had that something - she didn't know what, but something - was missing, and that what she was experiencing wasn't quite real. You got that sentiment across so well - I could really feel the confusion and even fear that she felt. I absolutely loved how even with the memory charm in place, there was some part of her that still remembered her daughter, and felt a sense of wrongness when she was away... and I really appreciated Ron going with Hermione to retrieve her parents, especially since I'm sure that he had his own grieving to do.

I'm glad this had a happy ending. It made me tear up... a lot of these HC entries have been doing that to me!

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Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! It's probably the most stylistic piece I've ever written, and I was afraid that people would get lost, and it would defeat it's purpose. It's wonderful to hear that it worked!

As a mom, I kind of obsessed over the idea, actually. Haha. I really wanted to show that even without memories, after you have a child you're permanently changed. And if you just erase that part of someone, they're not going to be the same person anymore.

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for such a wonderful review! You're awesome.


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