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Review:ginnypotter242 says:
Okay, now I'm crying. This was incredibly sad! Seeing the relationship Roxanne had with her dad, even just through the past chapters of this, I can only imagine how hard this would be for her. I think you kept her in character though, and it was a good way to bring the fireworks back. I think it was the kind of funeral Fred would have wanted, and Roxanne's speech was definitely in character for her relationship with her father. The entire story was really sweet, but obviously rather sad as well.

I like the friendship between Roxanne and Hugo. It's not a friendship that's typically seen, as their ages are usually portrayed as so far apart. I like that this was r=from Hugo's point of view as well, it added a bit of a twist. The conversation between Roxanne and Hugo in the beginning, when they were discussing the fireworks at her birth was adorable. It was heart-wrenching when Roxanne said that she would never had a chance to ask him what the second kind were. I'm glad Hugo was there and was able to answer for her. They had a really nice relationship and it was portrayed really well. Great job on this story!

~Sara (House Cup 2014 Review)

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