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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
House Cup 2014 Review

I love Scorpius. That is all.

Except itís not of course, but I just love this whole beginning of the chapter and how heís hanging back, assessing everyone, their characters and allegiances and motivations and whether theyíre safe or not, and that line about becoming a true Malfoy is just so good and perfect because he is, heís mastering these disguises but heís also looking out for Rose and Lorcan and if thereís anything the Malfoys care about itís their own so that works on so many levels - both the slightly negative way Scorpius sees it and the positive traits as well.

Rose and Lorcan running off to swear is the greatest mental image ever and kind of reminds me of the early days of the Nano cabin.

Hermione and Hasani are perfect, again. I love love love this line: ďÖalternating between the English and Arabic word for him, as if it were some sort of ritual which would bring them closer to them.Ē Itís just so insightful and poignant and such a wonderful line, and Hermioneís empathy just adds to it.

That segment about Islam is beautiful. Iím really glad you added that in there Ė not only is it a wonderful piece of characterisation and worldbuilding, but itís just a really good nod to Egyptian culture as a whole, so well done.

Oh this owl spell is so true to Hermione and the way she was as a teenager and I love it. I love so many things about this chapter that this review is getting horrendously repetitive and Iím sorry.

Oh wow. That line about how Hermione hasnít confronted death since the final battle was incredible and Iím in awe at how many characters youíve managed to capture and how complex they are like wow wow wow.

Author's Response: Yay for Scorpius love, the more he gets the better!

I know, he's such a Slytherin in a way and a Malfoy too as you said because this shows why their traits are useful in these situations because if he was a Gryffie he probably would have gone bursting in, wand raised and possibly attacked them all. It was really interesting to write this side to him though as he was getting closer to his Malfoy roots even if he didn't want to.

Bahahaha, I'm glad that you liked that as I imagine I would have done the same too.

Aw, thank you! I feel as if I should come up with some sort of platonic ship name for them or something as they are rather cutesy but that might be a bit weird, so let's just leave it to the reviews... I'm glad that you liked the note about Islam though as I have always wondered about Islam and magic and given how integrated Islam is into Egyptian culture I felt it was needed.

It's fine, I love this review and it really made my day! I'm so glad that you liked Hermione because in a way she's so easy to write as she's so like me but in another way she's such a major character it's hard to get all her mannerisms into the story too.

Thanks for such a fantastic review! :D

-Kiana


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