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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
House Cup 2014 Review

Remember how I said a chapter or two ago that ancient cities are all Iím about? Iím going to expand on that and say ancient abandoned cities with a violent past of Roman conquest and terrifying ghosts/enchantments/random bones are DEFINITELY all Iím about and Iím in love with this whole premise and everything about whatís happening in Acanthus right now.

I donít know how much of this is based on your own travels/experiences but the stray animals line made me smile because have you been to Pompeii there are stray dogs EVERYWHERE

Lorcanís theorising. I hope Lorcan theorises something cool/correct/bone-chillingly creepy.

I love the scenes with Hermione and Hasani and the ways they open up to each other and close off again, and the tension between Hermione and the rest of her family is really well done given the environment and everything thatís at stake Ė really well done.

I feel like Iím being a stuck record with everything Iím saying about the Scorpius storyline but I canít wait to find out whatís going on and who Frederic Russell is and I love the little details of characterisation you throw in, like Scorpiusís lack of pity and how itís the first time heís ever felt that, and youíre building this perfect image of a rounded and complex character with those little snippets and details and PLEASE DONíT KILL HIM IíM SO ATTACHED

Iím so excited and so scared for the next chapter

Author's Response: Bahahaha, yes I did remember so I'm so glad that you liked it here because it means so much to me given how you know so much about ancient cities. It's also a good thing that you do like them as they appear a lot more in this story from this point onwards. I have been to Pompeii and it was really sad because they were like don't touch the dogs but I wanted to as they were so cute and adorable and I loved them.

Bahaha, Lorcan's theories should become a thing I swear, but yes pay attention to them. ♥

I'm so glad that you liked them, because I think Hermione always has this strange ability to root out the ones who could be useful to her or need her and she did it with Hasani, so I'll be looking at those two a lot more from now on.

Aw, I'm so glad you're excited about that because that storyline took a back seat in a way compared to the main with Rose, so it's great that you still liked it. As for finding out more about Frederic and whether Scorpius will die or not, the last few chapters should give you all the answers in regards to that ;)

Thanks for a great review :D

-Kiana


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