Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:adluvshp says:
This is getting even more interesting. It is strange that "Death" came out of the shadows to talk to Cadmus. Of course, it makes sense for it to ride thestrals. That is a very nice little detail that you've put there and I like it. It is also interesting how we get to see three of the brothers, so different in their characters, and yet still united by family. It is nice that they're ready to help each other.

Your descriptions were yet again beautiful. I especially like how this chapter is written years after the introduction, and you mention how the sins of the brothers have grown with time. It is all very unique and I really enjoyed reading that segment.

All in all, another well-written chapter. I am quite enjoying this story and I'd really like to see how it progresses, how the brothers 'apprehend' Death particularly, and your writing is very very good, so I'm going to add this to my favourites and follow it. Do update soon!

10/10

House Cup 2014 Review.

Cheers
-AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Yay! Even more interesting! Yes, yes, the thestrals! I didn't necessarily have that part planned, but it came out so well!

WHAT? Favorited!! OH MY GOSH YOU JUST MADE MY DAY!!!

I feel special. You are awesome. :hearts:


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 949
Submit Report: