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Review:adluvshp says:
Hello there! This surely seems like an interesting story. I absolutely love your concept and I can tell your plot is something unique and intriguing. This first chapter definitely drew me in, and I loved the whole darkness that surrounded it. Beginning the story with "death" was complete genius. I also loved how you incorporated the Seven Deadly Sins, explaining each, and how they could all be found in the tavern. The characterisations of all three brothers looks fantastic as well, and I'm really excited to see how their relationships develop and the story progresses. I am curious to see what you have in store for each of them.

The descriptions were beautiful, and painted an amazing imagery in front of my eyes. Your writing style is brilliant and the flow is superb. I was captivated while reading. Over all, I think this is a great start to what seems like an amazing piece of writing. I'm glad I got a chance to read this!

House Cup 2014 Review.


Author's Response: This is probably the most personified piece I've ever attempted to create, so the fact that you like the style and the deadly seven is really, really encouraging!

I love all three of the brothers in different ways. There certainly is a lot of progression and change I have planned, it'll be interesting to see how it all ends up.

Oh goodness, thank you so much for this wonderful review! This piece hasn't gotten too much attention, and I think it's rather good, so it's nice to know that someone agrees!

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