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Review:Beeezie says:
This was a really interesting take on Andromeda and her family!

I felt like your initial description really was the classic, stereotypic middle child, but you took it so, so much further. I loved the idea of Andromeda initially being a peacekeeper and then later being the target of joint hatred and resentment - even when she left the family, she helped unite her sisters. I really liked that take, because throughout the books, we see snatches of conflict and discordance between the sisters - not just with Andromeda herself, but between Narcissa and Bellatrix as well.

I also loved how you depicted Andromeda after she married Ted - in this, she truly was both a product of her environment and trying desperately to escape from it. The struggles she had with simple household tasks and interactions was perfect, as was her sense of emptiness when she realized that there were so many things that Tonks wouldn't get. It was almost as though she didn't quite know how to be a mother with the shallow, surface stuff removed.

My heart really went out to her toward the end - it was a heartbreaking glimpse of a character who I find endlessly fascinating. Thank you; it was a beautiful read.

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