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Review:adluvshp says:
Hello again! I am quite liking the way things are going. It's nice that Draco and Hermione are finally being civil to each other. I also like the little details you put in like Pansy being at the Manor, and Draco 'inviting' Hermione for breakfast. It was also interesting that Draco actually set protection charms around Hermione's apartment - that's one nice gesture, and of course the least he could do.

Harry seems to shout a lot in this story by the way, haha, but it's to be expected with the way people barge in and out of meetings. This Prince girl seems intriguing too, though I hope she's a 'good' character, even though she is giving me sort of negative vibes. I guess I'll just have to wait and read to see what she is actually like.

Hermione's letter to Ron was so short and clipped, it made me realise just how much they had drifted apart. Nonetheless, I hope he comes back soon as it would be interesting to see his reaction to the friendship between Draco/Hermione.

All in all, another good chapter with nice descriptions, consistent characterisations, and good plot points.

House Cup 2014 Review.

-Cheers,
AD

Author's Response: Hey :)

Pansy is one of my favourite characters to write because so much can be done with her - we only see one side of her in canon but I like to show her differently.

Harry is very angry since the war! I think it affected him a lot more than he lets on to everyone else, it just seems to come out in bursts for him haha

Thank you again,

PM21


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