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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi!

Wow, this such a different take on the whole Severus/Lily/James thing and I really enjoyed it. I really liked how you worked around the theme of dancing as it can be linked to so many things from love, to fun, to hello and goodbyes and you managed to tie it into all those so well that I was really impressed. There was another little tiny thing I wanted to comment on quickly too and that was your section breakers which I really loved as the crossed symbolised so much and it was such a tiny thing but worked so well.

I really liked the fact that James invited Severus to the wedding as it showed that he had finally overcome his animosity towards him and could be the person Lily was marrying. Snape’s emotions were just so sad and so horrible too as they were so raw and pure and there were so many lines which got to me but this ‘Lily Evans and Severus Snape shared their final dance at her wedding.’ And this ‘That could have been me.’ Were especially moving and just kind of rammed home how it could have been different and that was really powerful.

Great one-shot!

-Kiana
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