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Review:jessicalorewrites says:
Hey!

I haven't read anything from the POV of Remus during his changing before so I don't have much to compare this to, but wow is it detailed!! I know you wrote this for the 5 senses challenge but it is so rich with smells and sights and sounds, I'm just... blown away! It's amazing how well you wrote this!! Especially since he is a werewolf and I think all of his senses would be heightened like in the way you present them.

To be honest, I wasn't really expecting him to recognise the other Marauders in his werewolf form. This kind of goes against everything I've ever thought about that state of mind, but it was a sweet touch nonetheless, and very well written still. That last line was so heartbreaking. "After all, I am still a monster". It's just horrible to think about Remus believing stuff like that.

Overall a thoroughly enjoyable chapter that touches on important things like friendship and internal debate. I loved it!

xo

{House Cup 2014 Review - Gryffindor}

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review! You're so sweet! ♥

- Kayla :)


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