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Review:Freda_and_Georgina says:
For the House Cup 2014 Review
Heehee your opening is spectacular! Both the story description and the storyline. :)
Hmm, I wonder how connected he is with Death Eaters.
"Which is unfortunate because we all really want to know." Haha that's just awesome. :) The narrator voice really knows the readers, doesn't it?
Poor bloke. I'd say Turner is at least a bit mad. And OCD.
Wow. I'm glad Turner has some morality, it's such a shame Yaxley took it the way he did; especially right then and there.
Haha what an ending! Why can't the cookies ever be on the good side? ;) Great Story!
--Freda

Author's Response: HI! I am glad you liked it. At last minute I decided to play the narrator to add something different since I tend to do third POV one-shots all the time. I wanted to put a little spin. Yes, Mr. Turner has some OCD and is a very angry man and not to mention unsociable.

And the good side never has cookies. No one wants to be a villian so the dark side always needs to be some convincing with cookies lol

Thanks a ton for R&R! =D


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