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Review:ginnypotter242 says:
Aww, the girls on the team all seem so nice! I really like Jessie, she seems like a sweetheart, especially calming Ginny's nerves like that. I'm glad Ginny got over her nerves during the try-out! She is usually so confident and self-assured, seeing her all nervous and worried was so unnatural. I'm really glad that she made the team, her dream team. The flyer that gave her back her confidence was cool- nothing special about it, but it was enough to help her. And it was in Gryffindor colors, which probably helped.

Ron and Hermione's fight was sweet- Ron didn't want her to leave him. I understand that, after everything they've been through. But I feel like Ron would have gone with her, if not Ron and Harry. It's going to take a while to search all of Australia!

Great chapter, you wrote Ginny's nerves really well.

~Sara (House Cup 2014 Review)

Author's Response: Hi again! If I didn't already make it clear, I really appreciate that you chose my story to read and leave all these lovely reviews for :) Reviews really make my day!

Anyways, I really like the girls on the team, too! I spent a lot of time getting to know them and I can't wait for more of them to make appearances later in the story.

I agree with you on how unnatural Ginny's nerves were. I was worried about that, so I tried to give her some thoughts about how it was strange, leading to her own concern over not being herself. It was a lame attempt at a cover-up... but what can I say?

The flier was in Gryffindor colours, I'm glad you caught that! Yupp, I think that's what gave Ginny the confidence to get in the air.

It will take a while to search all of Australia, but I thought Hermione would really insist that everyone else - especially Ron - stay behind, as the whole Weasley family was obviously going through a time in which they all needed to stick together. I think Hermione didn't really want to leave them, either, but she needed to find her own family.

Thanks so much again for all the feedback! I hope you keep following the story!
Christy

PS. I only just realised how perfect your username is for this story :)


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