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Review:marauderfan says:
WHAT ARE THESE FOOLS DOING RUNNING AROUND BY THEMSELVES IN THE DESERT? They obviously never took wilderness survival classes. And if I weren't so concerned about them all getting lost in the desert, I'd yell at Scorpius for littering. Throwing a water bottle on the floor? For shame, Scorp.

Poor David - after the death of everyone in his original group, his three remaining friends plan to leave into the future again. Bless him, thinking they'll all stay in touch too. They won't, because how would they send letters through time? - and David will be all alone with the knowledge of what happened. :'(

Scorpius got left behind?!!? Why couldn't he have just put a smaller amount of potion divided among three phials? Do you need a certain amount in order for it to work - like if there wasn't enough would you get Splinched or something? (ok, too many questions, sorry) Aaaa I can't believe you left him in the past! I mean, at least David isn't alone in the desert at this point. That would actually have been worse if the three of them had just left him there to find his own way out. At least he has Scorpius with him for now.

So next chapter predictions... Scorpius returns to the future by any one of the following means: 1) Time turner. 2) He turns into a vampire and lives out the intervening years and is still 22 a hundred years later. 3) A man with a time-travelling yurt rescues him. Am I close? :P Anyway, superb chapter and I can't wait for the last one!! ♥

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Author's Response: I am so so so sorry for taking aeons to get to this life has been incredibly cruel to me! But yes yell away at them as they are rather idiotic in this chapter albeit it's rather funny to watch all of their failures.

I know, it's so sad and so horrible and I felt so cruel doing this to him. Just wait and see with Charlotte I'll say as I never was too cruel when it came to him.

Erm, yes, dun dun dun moment or waht! Bahaha in terms of your questions, you needed the whole phial because time travel does require a lot of work so without all of it it wouldn't have worked so yes, they couldn't share it out so one had to say. Erm, so don't worry too much as David and Scorpius can be together forever now!

Ooh I love the vampire idea, it's such a good one and I really wish I went with it now! :D

Thanks for a fab review :D

-Kiana


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