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Review:Juicey_Moosey says:
House Cup 2014 Review

As I enjoyed your Voldemort series of one-shots so much, I thought I'd give this story a go as well, and in glad I did! Your writing was incredibly humorous, and the use of all the cliches was absolutely hilarious!

One of my favourite features of this story was the drawn out similes such as "Her eyes sparkled like the finest diamonds, the type sold only by the wealthiest African warlords." And "Her skin was as soft as mink fur, from an actual mink, not a polyester copy.", which had me laughing far too much! Another feature I loved was your use of the phrase "and for the literary convenience of this story" which made me giggle!

The writing style and the plot, especially the trip to the future were really clever an creative, and very well written. I'm glad I did give this a go, as it did not fail to amuse! Thank you for another great story, and I look forward to reading more of your work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

With this story, I was pretty much just trying to fit as many cliches and stereotypes as possible into one story.

One generation of romantic angst is never enough, we must have the future as well!

Thanks again!

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