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Review:AlexFan says:
House Cup Review 2014

Hola Kiana, coming back for more reviews! I can't imagine what it must've felt like to be Rose and to all of a sudden be dropped into this new place with no recollection of ever going there. If I was in her place, I would've probably lost my head for like half an hour before coming to the idea that I was supposed to get myself out of a desert. I loved your description as well because it really showed how confused Rose was feeling and how the world must've been turning around her at a time like this. She's stuck in this time period, just trying to straighten out the world around her so that it doesn't spin so much.

Next to being dropped somewhere that you don't know, imagine Charlotte and everyone else's reaction when they find Rose and Lorcan showing up in the middle of the Sahara desert with absolutely no explanation as to how they got there. But I mean, I guess when you're magical anything weird that happens doesn't really get questioned.

I can totally understand why Lorcan faded as well, he probably handled the news that he was stuck in 1922 in the best way that one can in a situation like that, by fainting. At least his mind can wrap it's head around the fact that he's stuck in the past without anymore stress being added to it.

Anyway, great chapter!

Author's Response: Hey Grace!

Bahaha, I know what you mean because if that was me I would start screaming, screaming and probably just want to die so she's a lot more collected than I ever could be. I'm glad that you liked her reaction to the craziness though as it was a lot of fun to tune it down compared to my crazy wails.

I know, but that will be developed later. Plus travelling around looking for treasure and things like that was fairly common in those times so that's why they aren't too shocked in a way.

Lorcan is a bit more chilled but I guess with Luna as his mum that's almost natural for him.

Thanks for a great review and sorry for taking a while to respond to it! :D


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