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Review:DMsSlytherinPrincess says:
For The 2014 House Cup Review Challenge!!

I like how it started, it picked up right away with what's going on. Draco and Hernione was true to character, the bit of violence was not over powering but made the point clear. I like how you involved so many characters in such a short chapter, especially Pansy.
MacNair and Voldomort was very well written, I thought it was funny when he said that Dumbledore is more intelligent than Voldy, slightly lol.
I was wondering how can a Death Eater whom worship and fear their Lord say such a thing, how was Voldomort going to allow that? Then he Avada Kadavra-ed him. Thats when I, "Oooh"ed. I also love how you explained that witg detail and not just,
"Avada Kadavra!!" Voldomort shouted.
Enjoying it so far going to keep reading!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed review! I hope you continue to enjoy! :)

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