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Review:marauderfan says:
Hahaha, I love that despite Molly's outward appearance, she is still rather Percy-like in her sense of organisation - like her compulsion to keep all the bottles properly colour-coded, and the sense that if she's later than ten minutes early, then she's late. I laughed at the part where she volunteered to go wake up the missing players who slept in late, as well - she definitely would make a no-nonsense captain who gets everyone in line, that's for sure!

What a disaster of a first practice :-/ Honestly though, I can't blame any of the characters for acting as they are (well... maybe except for Jinks, who is just lazy). Molly might have been undermining Fitz' position by ordering everyone else on the team around, but she also really just wants the team to succeed and this is finally her chance. And Fitz is struggling to keep some authority over his hodge-podge team and obviously wouldn't appreciate some entitled girl doing his job for him. You've set up a really great and believable conflict between your characters already and it's only two chapters in!

I am loving this story so far and would love to keep reading but it's quite late at night so I'll be back tomorrow :P

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