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Review:Pretense Of Perfection says:
I'm not sure i've ever read anything from Remus' POV during his transition and while he was a werewolf, or if I have, not anything so detailed. I love how you included his senses in this, because his transformation seems to me like it would be very sense based. His sight, hearing, smell, touch, and taste would all probably be in overdrive, and I imagine it would be hard for him to concentrate on anyting else at first. I like how once he sees all three of his friends there in his animagus form he slightly remembers who he is, enough to know that he doesn't want to hurt them. Their interactions with one another during this time are also spot on, to me at least. I see them playing and teasing each other, having a good time, but I imagine there is always that undercurrent of danger and intrigue, like Lupin could snap at any moment and rip one of them to shreds. It's a true testament to their bond that he doesn't, and that they trust him enough not to. I love the title as well, because it so accurately captures the way Remus feels about himself, even if it is sad.

--house cup 2014 review--
gryffindor

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I'm actually quite proud of this story and seeing you (and others) liking it makes me so happy :D

Thank you so much! ♥

- Kayla :)


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