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Review:zealousVisionary says:
House Cup 2014 Review

Oh, what a funny little story this was! I love fanfics that just tell about funny little bits the family lives of different characters- they never fail to make me smile.

As usual, your writing was wonderful- it just flows so well, and the dialog in this story was hilarious. Teddy Lupin's thoughts, especially the ones about him forming a Quidditch team made me giggle.

The chaos of family life was written so well too. I have a fairly small family, but every summer my mom's entire side of the family all crowdx into this tiny lakehouse we have and needless to say, craziness always ensues, so I can definitely relate to that insanity.

Anyways, thanks for making me smile tonight!

Author's Response: I love a family story, they're fun to read and fun to write. And I really enjoy the Next Gen Weasleys as grown-ups.

Thanks so much - I do love to write dialogue, sometimes I have to make myself add some description haha. I'm glad it turned out well.

I have a large family when we all gather together, but being super-Irish, someone is usually feuding with someone else and so a large chunk is missing from get-togethers and then it's "Well, your great-aunt isn't speaking to your aunt because of what she said about your second cousin" and things like that. It's nuts. So I hear ya!

Thank you for reviewing!


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