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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
No! Not Jeremiah's portrait! :(( How dare you take my heart and rip it to shreds! I loved your integration of the muggle world and magical world outside of Hogwarts; it flowed seamlessly with the Fat Lady's life inside the safety of the castle.

Professor Dumbledore's kindness is spot-on with his canonical characterization! Offering the Fat Lady the post of Gryffindor House's entrance portrait illustrates this trait seen so often in him throughout the books. It's so sweet how you wrote her as remembering her husband so much and doing things the way she thinks he would to keep his memory alive. But oh, Tom Riddle, you sneaky little turd! The Fat Lady handled the different situations thrown at her very well and only regretted not giving out her words of wisdom; but thank you for having them in there as sort of a pick-me-up from the sadness of the story so far.

Wonderful wonderful story, I'm glad you continue to write beautiful things such as this! :)
~MadiMalfoy x

Author's Response: Hi again! :)

Aw, I'm sorry!! I felt quite bad about Jeremiah but it was the right choice for the story even if quite cruel. Writing the magical world and history was one of my favourite parts of this story so I'm so glad you liked it!

Aw, good, I'm glad you liked Dumbledore. I imagined him noticing the people who usually don't get much attention and giving them a second chance and an important position, like with Hagrid.

Tom Riddle is so sneaky! I'm glad you liked this story, thanks so much for the really lovely reviews - I really appreciate it! :)

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