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Review:AlexFan says:
House Cup 2014 review!

Hey Kiana, guess what, 200th reivew! WOOHOO!

Okay so I had to go back and skim through this chapter to refresh my memory and now I have something to talk about. This was the chapter that basically set the story in the direction that it's gone so far.

Sandstorms don't sound like a lot of fun, especially after reading this chapter and the amount of movies that I've seen have portrayed the same thing. I think if Rose and the rest of the gang had kept going and ignored the warning then they would've been in serious danger. They could've gotten buried in the sand.

When Scorpius saw the building I just knew that something bad was going to happen. I mean, it was in the middle of the desert in the middle of nowhere, of course that wasn't going to be safe! But I mean, I guess if I was in Rose or Scorpius's situation I would've picked the suspicious house that conveniently shows up when I need it over facing a sandstorm and risking my life.

Anyway, I'm excited to read the last two chapters of the story and GO RAVENCLAW!

Author's Response: YAYAYYA thank you so much for being my 200th review, as it means a lot to me!

Yes, this chapter was definitely the most pivotal one in the way it just changed everything and there really was no going back after this point.

No they aren't especially after talking to some people who have been one, they just sound like the worst thing ever. Yes, things in the middle of the desert never generally tend to be good things and just shriek danger, but I guess a sandstorm shrieks that too so you don't have much choice in where to go :P

Thanks for a fab review, Grace! :D

-Kiana


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