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Review:AlexFan says:
House Cup 2014 review

Kiana, I'm returning the favour of reviewing Acanthus (and I'll be back to bombard you with even more reviews so prepare yourself) and wow, this was really action-packed. The thing that I really liked about this chapter was that it had fighting and action but it didn't drag out for an unnecessary amount of time. There was enough fighting to keep it interesting but not so much that the reader got bored halfway through the story (which I have been known to occasionally do while reading fanfiction).

I KNEW IT! The moment that Anthony suggested that he go as Scorpius, everything just fell into place for me and I realized that it wasn't really Scorpius that had died at all. I can't believe that he didn't realize it sooner though, you'd think Scorpius, smart as he was, would've figured that out by himself. I feel bad for Rose though having to witness her friend commit homicide and then suicide. At least she knows what happened instead of being left wondering for the rest of her life.

Looking forward to the last two chapters!

Author's Response: Wah thank you Grace, your reviews were really fab!

Yes it certainly did have a bam, bam, bam quality to it with the way everything happened all of a sudden but I'm glad it wasn't dragged out. It's probably mainly due to me hating action scenes so I tried and cut them off as soon as possible. That's probably the one thing I don't miss about Acanthus as action scenes are just blergh.

YES YOU DID!! Bahaha I just feel like yelling plot twist, because it was just so much fun knowing this for ages and ages and none of you knowing. Now I sound a little mean but you get the gist.

Thanks for a fab review! :D

-Kiana


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