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Review:Iellwen says:
House Cup 2014 and Fifth Decree!

Oh, wow.
This was so intense, so tortured... So sad!
Come with me... Calling for him, rendering him mad with grief, unable to deal with his loss... Unable to go on...

I love the repetition you used, to let the read sink in the inevitable madness along with Draco..
Depression starts when you can't break the vicious circle of 'bad' thoughts...

I don't know who Catherine is, but she was obviously so important to Draco... And she died from the Battle of Hogwarts, at the hands of Rodolphus nonetheless... I wonder if Bellatrix, had she seen her husband aim him wand to kill her nephew, would have reacted...

Poor Draco. He really couldn't see any light, couldn't pick himself from rock bottom...

That was very intense, kudos for writing this!!

*Gee

Author's Response: Hello there! Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked this and found it intense, as that was my aim.

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