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Review:nott theodore says:
Hi WTM! I thought that it was about time I came and left some reviews for our lovely staffers while I'm in the middle of this reviewing frenzy, and this story has been something I've wanted to read for a while, even though I've not had chance to read the Midnight Run series yet.

This is the first time in any next generation story I've read that I've seen Molly characterised the way she is here - not only a Quidditch player, but a bit of a punk - a Quidditch player with a green mohawk! It's so original and made me intrigued in the story straight away with the description at the beginning which told us about her appearance but also the situation Molly's been in with regards to getting to play Quidditch.

I love the set up in this chapter already! The meeting was with McCormack was so well written and I thought the dialogue was great, because it seemed so believable. It's exciting that Molly's going to captain the new team! Fitz was an interesting character too, and I could understand his frustration at being told he's got half of the training season to sort out a whole new team of players who've come from all over as reserves - it's not going to be easy! I'm looking forward to seeing what's going to happen next!

Sian :)
Gryffindor House Cup 2014 Review

Author's Response: I'm still playing catch-up from the review frenzy! I swear I got more reviews during the Cup than I have all year. It's definitely made me super happy :D

This story should be okay on its own, without having read the Midnight Run series. It falls into the same world, but all of this story is after the Midnight Run ones and I tried to make it a stand-alone.

I haven't seen a version of Molly like mine either - she's an OCD Head Girl type as well as dressing in leather and running around with a mohawk and being a "cool" type instead of totally nerdy.

I liked writing McCormack. First chapters are usually the hardest to write for me, but this one came along pretty easily so I'm glad you thought it read well. Fitz really has his work cut out for him, even if he'd been an experienced coach which he certainly is not.

Thanks so much for reviewing! You are a beast, your review total for the Cup was insane! :)


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