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Review:nott theodore says:
Hi Isobel! I'm so sorry about the first time I reviewed this story, but thanks so much for letting me know! I really enjoyed this story and it would have been such a shame if I hadn't been able to leave you a review for this chapter! ♥

This was a really poignant and moving end to the story. I loved the way that you linked all of the story together by writing about Roxanne from different perspectives, using second person each time. I thought it was a really clever way of tying the theme into all three of the chapters of this collection.

I had tears in my eyes when I realised that George had died in this chapter; it's just so sad to think of that happening and his children then having to deal with it, which is something that isn't normally explored in fanfiction. But I thought that you wrote Roxanne's grief really well - it was so believable and raw, and I felt sorry for Hugo too, for wanting to be able to help her but not really knowing what to do. The background which told us about the way that Roxanne had looked after Hugo in the past was sweet to read, too, because it meant that we got to understand their relationship better.

I'm still sad at the fact that Roxanne had to deal with George's death in this story and go to his funeral, but I loved the way that she spoke at the end. He's definitely not the sort of person who would want a sombre funeral so letting off fireworks in his memory is something he'd have appreciated, and it ties in well with the chapter title 'Legacy'. The last few lines were just perfect, for tying this story together and leaving me with something moving and poignant to think about. This has been one of my favourite house cup stories and I've loved the chance to read it!

Sian :)
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