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Review:LadyL8 says:
Hi There.

I'm reviewing for the House Cup, and I thought your story looked so interesting. And it was. Wow. I don't think I've ever read anything like it. It was so original, so chilling and I absolutely loved it.

I really like the idea to combine facts with fiction. We know that people were burned for being witches, but it happened so long ago that it doesn't really effect us much. But by combining it with fiction, and especially a relatively new fictional world like Harry Potter, you really see it differently and it effects you more. And I think it's easier to really understand what they did, when you see it in a world you know and love like Harry Potter.

You're really good at imagery. I could imagine it all happening in my head, because your description is so good. The flow was good and I didn't notice any grammar mistakes.

And I just have to say; I loved how you ended it. With her being reborn sort of, just like a phoenix - rising from the ashes. It's was a perfect way to end it.

So as you've probably guessed, I really, really liked it. You're very talented!

- Lotte

House Cup 2014 Review

Author's Response: Hi, hi, LadyL8/Lotte!

Thanks for taking time to review. I'm glad you liked this one-shot! *blushes* "talented" - you are very kind. Yeah the non-fiction/fanfiction combo is a new dynamic. Other writers have explored this in the past, you should check their works out: MargaretLane, Girldetective85, and academica amoung many others I'm likely forgetting. Enjoy and thanks again :D

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